Maryam Khan

Rookie (27 Dec / Germany)

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  • Aarif Ameen (3/31/2009 12:49:00 AM)

    good work
    i liked any how
    but it would be much better if you use it instead of this
    this is me
    it may be
    its me
    check this and see
    i may get time and read you further and will tell you what you need to do further
    take care now

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True Poem

I m working on a poem thats so true, I cant show it to anyone.
I could never show it to anyone.
Because it says exactly what I think, and what I think scares me.
Sometimes it pleases me.
Usually it brings misery.
And this poem says exactly what I think.
What I think of myself, what I think of my friends, what I think about my lover.
Parts of it might please them, some of it might scare them.

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