Mbanaso Samuel

Rookie (imo state, Nigeria)

Comments about Mbanaso Samuel

  • Christine Warren (11/21/2012 10:36:00 PM)

    I do not know what you are trying to say here. I am not poetically analytical enough to comment on capitals or end rhymes, just to me your message is ocnfused and the language doesn't flow-but maybe you wanted the words to jar.Keep writng though.

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  • Olalekan Ajayi (10/24/2012 8:56:00 AM)

    Mbanaso's poems are quite impressive for a poet of his age. I also like his attempt at end rhymes as well as his first two stanzas beginning with capital letters and other lines in small letters as the experimental e.e. cummings did in his days. Keep writing Bro!

The Night Of You

Did not the night smile on my joy to tread,
when all my visions and dreams was you,
and when my fright buffed rue,
did not the dark plunge its dread?

To be in thy joyful stead,
this lonesomeness shall take the place of you,
and when the memories in taunt i swoonly view,
all i could see in the midnight dread -

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