Mbanaso Samuel

Rookie (imo state, Nigeria)

Comments about Mbanaso Samuel

  • Christine Warren (11/21/2012 10:36:00 PM)

    I do not know what you are trying to say here. I am not poetically analytical enough to comment on capitals or end rhymes, just to me your message is ocnfused and the language doesn't flow-but maybe you wanted the words to jar.Keep writng though.

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  • Olalekan Ajayi (10/24/2012 8:56:00 AM)

    Mbanaso's poems are quite impressive for a poet of his age. I also like his attempt at end rhymes as well as his first two stanzas beginning with capital letters and other lines in small letters as the experimental e.e. cummings did in his days. Keep writing Bro!

Solitude Of Loss

Behold thy sister - on a journey so long
behold she leaves to return no more
behold thy sister - thy only companion
remember your times for there'll never be more

wipe your tears 'cos leave she must
no matter the wail she ne'er return
begin to mourn - for your sister is dead
oh this lad shall wail but the deed is done

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