mimi brown

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  • Phillip Sawatzky (10/15/2009 1:45:00 AM)

    This doesnt do justice to your talents, as evidenced by your other poems offered on this site. But I like the vision, though something is missing, and that is your details and pointed perceptions.

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I wait at night
for the man to come.
Tired of daylight dawning.
Eyes blinded wide
in deep resistance.
Warm coffee, acrid lips
bitter lung cannot
breathe a breath.
I wait at night
for the man to come;
the eyes have lost the colors
of darkness to blue,
too red to see.

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