Mohammad Akmal Nazir

Rookie - 13 Points (Bahraich, U.P. India)

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  • Akmal Mazit (3/31/2019 1:09:00 AM)

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  • Ishan (7/15/2018 8:06:00 AM)

    Beautiful lines ..

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  • Nick Krakana (7/17/2011 9:39:00 AM)

    Like this, simple and true, always rings through......NK

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  • Alex 'The Poet' (A.T.P.) Lushaba (6/23/2011 7:41:00 AM)

    Well said poet..Great words....You know I rated it 9 because I was eager to get just one last sentence, but you denied(smiling) ..great my poet...I love it so much... I have already taken it for a frame in my room with the last part saying ' By: Mohd. Akmal Nazir....'

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  • Chris Darlington (6/23/2011 3:42:00 AM)

    some strong stuff in these poems

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  • Linda Patino (6/21/2011 11:00:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem..I loved it. I will gladly read more of your poems..Thank you for your nice comment on mine.

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  • Deejay Manaleng Deejay Manaleng (6/13/2011 9:10:00 AM)

    A humble complaint indeed it is....11 out of 10 love the 'thorns on my lips'

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  • Hribhu Dey (6/12/2011 9:04:00 AM)

    Varied subjects come to be foregrounded...personal experiences graduate into acquiring a universal value...luv reading your poem.

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  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (6/6/2011 1:46:00 AM)

    Audrey Heller (Miami United States; Female; 79)
     To: Mohd. Akmal Nazir
     Date Time: 4/2/2011 7: 57: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
     Subject: My Poems
    Thank you, so very much for you wonderful critiques. I'm very pleased indeed, in how you feel about my work. I did go and read, several of your new poems and I must say, you too, do a great job. We write differently, but you're very deep! I thank you, for sharing your work with me and I hope you'll continue toread mine, whenever you can!
    Audrey Heller

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  • Denvor Fernandez (6/4/2011 9:42:00 AM)

    Interesting poems always come as a stream of thoughts

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Best Poem of Mohammad Akmal Nazir

*a Humble Complaint*

You could have been more polite observing me,
Your harsh words have left
An indelible impression,
Hatred can be won by love alone,
As one gets relief from
Scorching heat
By gentle rain,
As the sermon of a saint soothes
The disturbed mind,
Your words could have healed
The wounds of my heart,
For once you touched me, felt me,
And covered your being with my love,
As you said,
You smelt my love and called it red rose,
What's happened now?
Thorns have grown on my lips,
My being has become the grave of your hatred,
Is it a ...

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Dejection

The sky is bright, the sun is hot,
the wind is blowing with rapturous sound,
But in my heart there reigns darkness
and pathos all around,
My life is under the burden of
self-imposed responsibilities,
Noone is there to share my overwhelming sensibilities,
I'm the messiah
of my own disease,

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