moon batchelder

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  • Alan Mcdowall (10/21/2009 2:48:00 PM)

    Class work congrats

    very good poem

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  • Zubyre Parvez Zubyre Parvez (11/9/2006 9:53:00 AM)

    Hey there, thanks for the feedback! Yes, am very interested in symbolism, mysticism and all that malarky also :)

    Blessings,

    Zub

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Crinkled Tin-Foil Ocean

dazzling 'neath an azure sky at noon
crinkled tin foil; teal and silver hued,
blindingly bright diamonds shining clear
and pure white manes on chargers prancing through

like steeds, released from gates invisible,
rush headlong at the sunlit granite walls;
those steely parapets worn smooth and fair
that loom, in ambush waiting for them there.