• Sally Plumb Plumb (8/6/2017 3:58:00 AM)

    The advice you give is good.

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  • Octavius Johnson Octavius Johnson (9/17/2013 4:02:00 PM)

    You are bold and very definite but I got lost in your flow. Your message wasn't lost just misplaced. I found it but if you simplify your description for us dummies, like me, you would wow people.

  • Major Elazia Major Elazia (8/22/2013 1:36:00 PM)

    Do not mind, I think in my view you have talent which is shaping up. I love your poems, kindly alert me when you make a new posting. We can build some poems together. Always invite critics like me to look at your owrks then re-visit your poem thereafterand improve it further. I keep on revising my poems depending on the comments I get.Not all comments are constructive anyway

  • Tripsha Ghosh Tripsha Ghosh (7/5/2013 11:48:00 PM)

    Awesome poems u are a very good writer! ! ! keep writing

  • Scott Summers (5/30/2013 10:05:00 AM)

    She saved
    The cum stained dress
    For a happier time
    A strategic time
    She mourns
    In her hard won

  • Hemraj Koirala Hemraj Koirala (5/27/2013 3:53:00 AM)

    Nivedita is a voice of voiceless people. She uses so technical words to explain bio physical bawl. words are few but they carry immense meaning. In her poem divinity dances, infinity emerges and perpetuity germinates. I found her poem are not only the by product of psychological itching, they carries a metamorphic message too.

  • Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan (5/5/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    Dear Nivedita

    I have read your poems many times over.

    You are an Uncut Diamond, Niv! ! It needs polishing...

    You are definitely a new voice on the horizon. And that voice is powerful. It will be heard.

    If a dog barks its heart out in a Crowded Street, that bark may not be heard even two streets away.
    But if a Lion gives even a Solitary Roar from his Solitary Cave, that roar is heard even miles away.

    You are that Lioness, Niv. But you have to work hard....Work constantly on your idiom, dear Nivvy, until it has that deep, unmistakable, cultivated roar....And then have patience...

    A controlled moderate stream of water can cut through even Six Inch Thick Steel.
    But a wayward spray of water, however powerful, may not even cut a single hole in the ground....

    (yes... I deliberately used the words Six Inches....)

    You are an Uncut Diamond, dear Niv! ! You need polishing.....

  • Praneetha Perera Praneetha Perera (10/2/2012 4:48:00 AM)

    as if you are asking for rape

  • Ally Mcdowell Ally Mcdowell (9/11/2012 4:39:00 PM)

    I just wanna say I like this poem and argree with the cause, but anyway I do will sound stupid compared to the other comments on this, espeisally with spelling errors I KNOW there will be.... with my luck, you see.

  • Amitabha Bagchi (9/9/2012 1:00:00 PM)

    ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ********************
    From: Rajendran Muthiah
    To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism
    Date-Time: 9/9/2012 8: 37: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject: Threat of Editorial Cannibalism
    Why you are under the threat of editorial cannibalism? You have the right to say/write what you hate in nice language. Your strength of diction in biological sciences is surprising. In 30 yrs, you have got this much of talents to write verses where no one can make amends. I am envy of your poetic magic. Only Islam denies rights to argue about things crooked or hateful. If anybody dares to make fun of some outdated ideas, they take guns to shoot. O.K. Best wishes dear.


    Hon'ble Poet Rajendran Muthiah-ji Nameste-ji

    [1] I'm highly indebted to you for all your encouragements to be steady on the Platform of Poetic Truth [PoPT] and I make no compromise to it, may be I'm become a 'Stand-Alone' what I felt earlier.

    [2] Once I was abused ‘Verbally’ thro' scribbles comments [Personally] on my poems [Read Inaesthetic Global Pollution &c] by a ‘Mentally Challenged’ so called poet in PH. But trounces of comments added muscles to my stand on PoPT.

    [3] Here not end of story the [un] wise PH banned my Poem I Want To Be Raped [1+14 words Poetry] &c those needed several typographical changes to keep upheld my PoPT ultimately by same trounce of comments by my Hon'ble Readers the PH gave in.

    Now PH playing foul play [instead of fair-play] by constraining me to post my comments on other poets what I've to do in the mail-box of poets in PH.

    Look I'd to take to post this comment of your's I'd to take help of my Hon'ble reader Mr. AB London who tirelessly does for me and I sincerely thank him.

    Kindest regards ~ niv


    Copy to Hon’ble Poet Rajendran Muthiah-ji Nameste-ji


    Posted thro’ courtesy of AB London


~ Why Hack My She ~

Why hack my mind?
I can be bare and nude.

Why do hush-hush eye scallop?
My chaste boobs
I can strip off veil for revel
Egressing 'no-bra-look'.

Why scope scoop tangently lips?
Lend red from beguiling xx blood
To satiate you lip hunger.

Why itch psychically in
Nibble nimble thighs and triangle
in between?
Dive dip deep in horripilant
River Ganga Yamuna
I can lay bedecking billow bed.

Stop hacking
Stop itching
Stop scooping
Stop scoping.

Hey come
Bare ...

Read the full of ~ Why Hack My She ~

~ Make Me Your Me ~

Ms. Nivedita

Your love
I club.

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