mystery writer

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  • Jerry Hughes (7/8/2009 5:32:00 PM)

    Most of your poems although well written tend to be self-indulgent, lighten up Brandie. Best wishes, Jerry

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Life

a precious rose petal floating in the wind
Breath coming in thin wisps
Her hair a golden mist of sparkling light
Her face lifeless but beautiful in all ways
She lay there the picture of beauty caught in a forever setting of lifeless death
Churning my stomach
So young
So pretty
Life just barely begun

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