mystery writer

Rookie (1993 / texas)

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  • Jerry Hughes (7/8/2009 5:32:00 PM)

    Most of your poems although well written tend to be self-indulgent, lighten up Brandie. Best wishes, Jerry

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Deep Water

i sink deep into a pool of water my eyes blink unnaturally
i jerk up no air
face hot
sounds unheard
just so unnatural
can't hear can't think
my heart pounding so loud
so rhythmically
thunk
thunk thunk
thunk
then stop
everything stops
the rotating earth
my heart
life itself
everything

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