Neelam Dadhwal

Freshman - 779 Points (Chandigarh)

Comments about Neelam Dadhwal

  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (8/9/2014 11:26:00 AM)

    I read all the eight new poems of Neelam and instead of commenting on each I preferred to comment on her as a poetess. she has proficiency in writing short poems but she expects a lot of intelligence from her readers. It would be better if she adds a foot note with her poems.

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  • Ali Baba Ali Baba (6/13/2014 7:30:00 AM)

    Merhaba

  • Ali Baba Ali Baba (6/13/2014 7:27:00 AM)

    deneme

Doubt And Destiny

Spiralling I believe what the lords teach
let them be succour in bond and life.

Tell me spirits as I introduce to you
willing to set a motion across
where the sun rises before dawn
coloring my drapes white membranous
perched over palm trees.

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