Neelam Kumar Sharma

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  • Eddie Gibbons (12/29/2011 5:22:00 AM)

    Hello Neelam. Thank you for your message. I think you have the making of a good poem there. I can only suggest that you shorten the poem and try to distill your thoughts into four or five stanzas. There is a forum for critiques on this site - perhaps you could post your poem there. Also try ABC Tales. They have a lively community of both new and experienced writers who are very helpful with feedback. Best wishes and good luck with your writing! Eddie.

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Come What May

After two scores and ten,
Often it occurs to a man-
Something stirs in back of mind,
When one stares years behind.

Ahead one sees a silhouette,
Which one had not thought to see
Until that time, in worlds different,
That were in joy or in pain spent.

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