newton sharma


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  • Barsha yadav. (4/13/2009 4:33:00 PM)

    Really your poem is very intresting and beautiful too.
    And the mentioning of every events happening on that vary day made this poem more attractive like a colourful flower of a garden.

    KEEP IT UP:
    AND WRITE MORE TO GET MORE COMMENTS:
    YOUR POEM IS REALLY FANTASTIC:
    - WRITE EVEN BETTER THAN THIS:

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'Today's Rainy Day'

I wrote this poem 'Today's Rainy Day' while going at office today in office bus when it started raining........





Aankhein moond ke Bus mein soya tha, bus office ke liye aage bad rahi thi

achanak bus ne jhatka khaya, aur neend khul padi

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