nicole rassbach


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  • Dickson Mseti Dickson Mseti (4/26/2010 4:37:00 AM)

    POETS HAVE ONE THING IN COMMON. LOVE FOR THE PEOPLE AND THEY ARE LIKE SOLDIERS IN WAR.THEY RESCUE EACH OTHER, HELP EACH OTHER AND DIE FOR THE WHOLE COMMUNITY.THANK YOU FOR BEING A POET.

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  • George The Great Viii (3/25/2010 12:30:00 AM)

    There is a noblest poetical feeling in this poem, but also morbid. Rather say romantic I should say more than a collection of surrealisitc sense.

    Keep writing.

  • George The Great Viii (3/25/2010 12:25:00 AM)

    That static scene 'I breathed in her lies/read the color of my eyes/all the tears i shed' has caught my attention because there is in this emotional tension, however, that delivery a self stirring, and despite this heightened sense of conflict there is also beauty and parallel of what it has been transformed.

    Well, I must keep reading you!

Save Me

take a look in the mirror
all i see as you near
is the pain and the fear
all the things that i hear

all the things you can do
everything it may come to
all the things you put me through
why cant i just get over you

you stepped on my heart
it fell apart
you betrayed me
no one can save me

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