nicole rassbach


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  • Dickson Mseti Dickson Mseti (4/26/2010 4:37:00 AM)

    POETS HAVE ONE THING IN COMMON. LOVE FOR THE PEOPLE AND THEY ARE LIKE SOLDIERS IN WAR.THEY RESCUE EACH OTHER, HELP EACH OTHER AND DIE FOR THE WHOLE COMMUNITY.THANK YOU FOR BEING A POET.

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  • George The Great Viii (3/25/2010 12:30:00 AM)

    There is a noblest poetical feeling in this poem, but also morbid. Rather say romantic I should say more than a collection of surrealisitc sense.

    Keep writing.

  • George The Great Viii (3/25/2010 12:25:00 AM)

    That static scene 'I breathed in her lies/read the color of my eyes/all the tears i shed' has caught my attention because there is in this emotional tension, however, that delivery a self stirring, and despite this heightened sense of conflict there is also beauty and parallel of what it has been transformed.

    Well, I must keep reading you!

The Living Dead

slowly watch as it burns
feeling all of the turns
insides rolling over and over
just like a clover
all the tears over you
why did you split me in two
my heart is breaking
it wasn't yours for the taking
it was handled without care

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