NITYA MORE


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  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/13/2014 8:29:00 AM)

    sad and beautiful end of the worID

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  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/13/2014 8:26:00 AM)

    give me some of that lovely Leisure great work

  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/13/2014 5:32:00 AM)

    Dawn Sun lovely sentiments in this poem Nitya, I'm sure your future as a poet is very bright.

  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/6/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    like your poems,10 out of 10 from me, keep going your doing great

Dawn Sun

You are like the dawn sun
when you smile with fun.
You are like the breeze of air,
which is full of care.
I didn't look for you out
I did know where I could spot
you didn't be anywhere you were there
Where you did rather like to be
it's me my heart it's me

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