noha el3wdy

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  • Lionel Dubos (6/7/2009 8:26:00 PM)

    Your poems are good in general but the hint that I can give you don't write a poem only when you are in a good mood. A poem can be happy or nit but it will stay a poem.

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  • Sherif Monem Sherif Monem (5/27/2009 7:20:00 AM)

    Noha I could not find your poems to read.
    regards
    sherif
    Southern California

Let Be Be

life is like a play
and each individual has a certain part
performing it day after day
will never change the original chart
it doesnt work that way
we dont choose the destination of the cart
no one is meant to stay
we all seem to die
its a rule, we dont have the choice to obey

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