Nyl Revol

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  • James Casey James Casey (11/6/2009 3:45:00 PM)

    Nyl Revol, Thank you for your comment, but I never wrote a poem called
    ' chances '
    Thanks James R Casey

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  • James Casey James Casey (11/4/2009 8:25:00 PM)

    I liked your poem ' chances ' Though I would have LOVED it if it had a more even flow

What You Don'T See

You don't see my eyes
Fill with tears
You don't see my mind aging
Like its been years.

You don't see my arms
Wrapped around my chest
Holding myself together
Forgetting all the rest.

You don't see the ache in my head
The pain in my heart
The sorrow in my life
And that's just the start.

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