Nyl Revol

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  • James Casey James Casey (11/6/2009 3:45:00 PM)

    Nyl Revol, Thank you for your comment, but I never wrote a poem called
    ' chances '
    Thanks James R Casey

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  • James Casey James Casey (11/4/2009 8:25:00 PM)

    I liked your poem ' chances ' Though I would have LOVED it if it had a more even flow

Tonight

I cry to myself
Each night.
Each smile, each laugh
Is a fight.
My bonds with friends
Are no longer tight.
Nothing anymore
Is ever righgt.
The prospect of intentional pain
Is a might.
And it might
Just be tonight.

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