Obed dela Cruz

Rookie - 326 Points (October 18,1995 / Marikina City)

Comments about Obed dela Cruz

  • Omar Ibrahim (7/15/2010 5:55:00 AM)

    i like young poets when they write well.....goooooooo obed

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  • Lovita Morang Lovita Morang (1/18/2010 12:32:00 AM)

    make US ONE OF YOU AND WE WILL BE WITH Yore

    admirable human dadication

    salute to you

    superb

  • Lovita Morang Lovita Morang (1/18/2010 12:31:00 AM)

    US ONE OF YOU AND WE WILL BE WITH You
    pure dedication

  • Melanie Johnson (1/3/2010 10:38:00 PM)

    Hey, Obed! ! ! I love your poems! I haven't read them all because you have many for me to read... That alone tells me you are great at this and that you live for this. I love your choice of words and your style. Keep up the good work! !
    Your friend,
    Melanie

  • Ency Bearis (8/20/2009 9:22:00 AM)

    You have the potential for the heir of being like the great Francisco Balagtas...keep it up....

Best Poem of Obed dela Cruz

A Friend Forever, Jesus Christ

Though I am down and bear a frown
Because words of sword are always painful
And rejection is always sorrowful.

My human friends called me names.
Words of rejection I earned from them.
But thank God, still I stand...

Jesus came and saved the day.
He removed my sorrows
and gave me laughter...

Thank You Lord Jesus for coming
Without You I'll never be here.
Thanks for Your strength.
Thanks for Your guidance...

To my Friend Forever, Jesus Christ

Read the full of A Friend Forever, Jesus Christ

My Own Beloved Master

Though I fall on the bloody ground,
And my enemies all around,
And when my foes stripped my heart using a sword,
Only I can do is to cry to my Lord.
When my enemies hit me with a rod,
Only I can do is to cry to my God.

For my blessed God loves me so,
And He never treated me like a foe,

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