Original Unknown Girl


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  • Jim Hogg (1/6/2012 1:01:00 PM)

    Wickedness has been eschewed -
    Goodness, mercy both approved -
    The paths of righteousness enthused
    Ditch high heels, and buy flat shoes
    Flirting rejected, so please excuse
    Ethical texts, lets all peruse
    Erotica sadly you refuse
    Thoughtfulness you have diffused
    HG's passions now defused
    Poetic annihilation ensues?
    Change of tone here makes the news
    Change of heart is yours to choose
    Muse abandoned, and not amused?
    Purer paths - down Humber cruise?
    All those verses - paid your dues
    Sunshine beckons, no more blues
    But this is serious - don't confuse
    These wise words I can't refuse
    I get your point, it's not abstruse
    It's in the language that you use
    Measured, balanced, sense suffused
    But all the same you've lit the fuse
    Hush of whisper round the pews
    'She's settling now for calmer views! '
    This clearly is no cunning ruse
    A curse on secret rendezvous
    So if you're watching Ps and Qs
    And grow concerned to disabuse
    Those who wander short of clues
    In search of tasty poetic chews
    Healthy, wholesome, meaty stews
    Send them here to read reviews
    Of work that’s pure, yea, free of screws
    And freer still of impure hues,
    Or sample her wisdom here infused -
    No trace of crude and thuggish crews
    No misplaced words around her strews
    But now Hull's Helen stands accused
    All she stood for, purged, recused
    But the truth of course is we can't lose
    For this girl always delivers the goods.
    xxx jim

    Seems I posted this on one of yer poems once upon a humber girl... xxx

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  • Is It Poetry Is It Poetry (6/29/2009 9:08:00 AM)

    She does know..how to see through
    the words so well..iip.... :)

  • Emancipation Planz (11/17/2008 4:46:00 AM)

    Here is a girl who knows
    her seasons, his reasons
    and she raises the fly rise high ... aroha xx

  • Flora Gillingham (4/14/2008 7:44:00 AM)

    From a throwaway comment that she has heard, a trifling thought or the merest glimpse of a memory, Helen can transform each into a profound, poetical experience. But that sounds far too pretentious and sombre - because she also makes me laugh out loud!

    F x

  • Tara very irritated with PH injustice (3/12/2008 11:35:00 AM)

    UG is such an inappropriate lettering for one of the most thought-provoking, thoughtful, empathic poets on PH, who wields her pen with a sometimes calm and sometimes effervescent fire. Love ya H. t x

  • Empath In Flames (3/10/2008 10:12:00 AM)

    This writer shows limitless potential in all aspects of poetry... I highly recommend readers to view this 'Unknown Poet' for a further depth in emotion & an evoking spirit....

  • Roger Cornish (2/28/2008 12:30:00 PM)

    Truly one of the top Five best poets on Poemhunter...
    Read and you shell see!

  • Kee Thampi (1/17/2007 4:34:00 AM)

    The riches of real beauty.....here, this poet is dear to me for ever....
    Lay your head upon my breast
    Wash salted droplets from my skin
    Allow the heavy sun to soak them in
    Hear beats upon my chest
    Kiss my cheek….
    Enraptured by your caress
    Fingertips so light
    The dash and deep gush she makes i.....
    and wish to swim over to a great sea
    Wash over me with turquoise seas
    And swim with me

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (1/2/2007 5:45:00 AM)

    To understand the required principles behind, true Romance Poetry, is to read the work of Helen(Humber Girl) .Her unique blend of romance, erotica, & in-your-face/tell-it-like-it-is verse, has enabled Helen to establish herself as a popular, & respected
    Poet, on this Site.Recently, she has enjoyed dabbling & experimenting with an array of different writing styles regarding, subject matter, & stanzaec construction. The results were indeed auspicious, and has enabled Helen to extend her literary repertoire to further poetic horizons.Want to take in some good reading today? Then don't log-off 'til you've surfed over to Humber Girl's Poetry jacket & enjoy!

    Frank James Christopher Ryan, Jr.
    .........January 2nd,2007

  • Jonathan Robin (11/24/2006 11:29:00 AM)

    H alf mantis, half cameleon, fair feisty smile ensnares
    E ach who'd reach out to flout defenses deep,
    L inking into think past static brink to peep
    E nchanted at joy granted, and unpeel her many layers -
    N otwithstanding easy landing laughter devilish prepares.
    H ere find multi mode code playing at fun game above mind leap
    E xtended to most others who oft smother her, who'd reap
    L ove's promise yet the core miss, though encore implore Miss, there's
    E ver multi-level interplay she levers through affairs.
    N ovel ways of thought in seconds caught - she soars where others creep -
    H elps entice in trice each suitor - though few suit, the price is steep -
    E nds unsmitten but rebitten, regrets [he]art rarely bares.
    LE sson learned shows an observer yearning
    N irvana she rejects while waiting further learning...

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(o) Water Always Finds Water (A Slippery Tale)

She asked her a few questions
Shuffled the cards
Laid out the deck before her
“Pick a few won’t you? ”
“Ah yes”, she said, “was he a water sign? ”
“Yes” was her reply
“And you? ”
“Yes, water too”

“Ah, now I see…
When water meets water, you know;
It just flows,
Flows into one another
No seams, no edges, smooth without ridges
But when water meets fire
Well that’s a whole different desire
Water gets heated up by fire
But water can put fire out”
With that, she could agree and had no doubt

“What you need” she said, “is a good earth ...

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