Pamela Davison


Pamela Davison Poems

41. Must It Be So? 9/8/2005
42. Dixieland Wordpad 9/9/2005
43. Metaphoric Richness 9/25/2005
44. October Considered 9/29/2005
45. Altruistic Ponderings 10/1/2005
46. Faith 9/16/2005
47. Evolution 7/22/2005
48. Apprentice 7/23/2005
49. Rise 7/23/2005
50. A Pink Floyd Shakedown 10/23/2005

Comments about Pamela Davison

  • Max Reif (7/26/2005 9:07:00 AM)

    Pamela, I've read a number of your poems after initially feeling thrilled by 'Panoramic' and quite impressed by 'Substantial'. I found beautiful things in 'Communion' as well, and 'Supreme Gift'. And the prayers you've written, like 'Beauty Way', have great dignity and beauty. I also found dignity of expression in the well-titled 'Ironies and Absurdities', in which your sentence structure is so clear and direct, though as I suggested in a note I wrote you, I also see more redeeming features balancing the ridiculous materialism you describe. Who knows why I feel impelled/inspired to read and comment on so many of yours.
    I find nuggets of gold in your poems. If there's a suggestion I might make (after so much praise) , it is that sometimes your lines tend to feel a little impersonal or abstract to me. There's no way to force it, but I want to see/feel a little more intimacy in your work at times.
    My very best wishes for your continued unfolding in the Beauty Way, as a poet and a human being.

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Best Poem of Pamela Davison

A Pink Floyd Shakedown

Arrogant seed,
oh, arrogant seed,
why must you grow
inside of me?
Hot-blooded greed
for fantastic lead,
why must passion
yield to your speed?

Here is the weed
that would choke my deed,
tripping on blow
by blow of plead,
where art recedes,
cliché succeeds.

Arrogant host,
oh, arrogant host,
why must I be
your faithful post?
Cool-headed ghost
who so knows the most,
I do not fear
your foolish roast.

Here is the coast,
my defenseless coast,
wear it torn well,
like a good host.
Arrogant seed, ...

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Apprentice

Ancient Mystery,
I am ready.
Lend me this time
To learn the simplicity
Of my role
In the Universal Equation.

Teach me to whisper
Words of thunder

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