Patrick Shields

Rookie (November 11th,1987 / Las Vegas)

Comments about Patrick Shields

  • Amie-Lee ...... (8/11/2008 9:19:00 PM)

    This person is a truly amazing poet. He writes from the ehart and soul, not from the head like some other 'poets'. Patrick is a truly shining example of a great poet, and I wish him luck in the future

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Red Blood Lines Roll Down My Arms, Shoulders, and Chest
I Roll Down My Sleeves Content With The Soon To Be Scars
As My Cuts Bleed I Make Sure To Clean Up My Crimson Mess
They Sting and Glow Red Like The Many Dying Stars

I Get In The Bath Tub Rinse My Cuts Off As The Blood Flows
The Water Turns To Blood Like The Nile River Did Long Ago
I Put Another Cleave Long Sleeve Shirt On Depression Wins As My Commen Sense Screams Noooo
The Power That I Get To Write These Poems Is Also My Greatest F

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