Patrick Tolan

Rookie (Born 6th of August 1989 / Essex, England)

Comments about Patrick Tolan

  • Ruby Root (7/31/2006 5:06:00 PM)

    Patrick I really enjoy your poetry. Your a fine young talented writer. Take care.

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Blind

i miss you like, i've lost my sight
insides too dark, outside, too bright
i miss you like, my chest feels tight
if we could arrange, tonight we might
i miss you like, a lucky strike
a pain intense, my heart on a pike
i miss you like, i miss you like

i miss you like, not coming home