Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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(015) This Baby Is Wonderful. - Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

All babies are wonderful
When I see them I let out a squeak
But here is one baby that I know
Who is totally unique
He is my cousin Tauzi
And he is six months old
He has interest in everything
He snatches at chains of gold
He is the only baby I think
Who caresses you back
When people look at him they say
“He is an angelic pack”
He rubs his face onto yours
And he tickles your ears
His smile makes you feel happy
Especially, when you are in tears
He knows when you are leaving
And he’ll look with his sad little eyes
When you give him a last look and go
You want to look once, then twice, then thrice
But I never get to hold him
They snatch away the little lad
People say I am too young
To hold him, which makes me sad
When you want to kiss him
He understands and comes closer like a magnet
He is one of the cutest babies
Is on which I can surely bet
He is just irresistible
I want to see him again soon
Hey you know what, mom says
He is coming this afternoon!

Comments about (015) This Baby Is Wonderful. by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

  • Kavya . (12/7/2013 4:08:00 AM)

    and a wonderful poem has erupted too............v nice description of ur cousin...........babies are like that..........they attract us like a magnet........... (Report)Reply

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  • (12/3/2008 12:16:00 AM)

    how cute and wonderful the baby, your thoughts and poem...........rgrds/salu (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (10/6/2008 5:18:00 AM)

    And the poem is also wonderful.

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  • (1/18/2008 7:41:00 AM)

    This poem that you have made is beautiful
    You are good at writing poems so keep up the good work your doing great
    best regaurds chauntae

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  • Melvina Germain (8/29/2007 6:42:00 AM)

    I hope you had a good visit with baby Tauzi Risha, he sounds like a real sweetheart. This poem shows a lot of love for a sweet little baby, I love it Risha.

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  • (8/13/2007 1:50:00 AM)

    Heyy! ! Thats my Son and it sounds so wonderful to get inspired by your words, which makes me more attached to my dear, and write a poem like this for you -Especially that ANGELIC PACK - Thanks a Million. These comments are only few among all the expressions and feelings i get after reading the great and superb poem (Report)Reply

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  • (8/12/2007 11:39:00 AM)

    You are nine! What a great sense of rhythm and rhyme you have! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/12/2007 11:36:00 AM)

    I certainly could not write such things when I was nine.
    You tell some things that really help me to see your cousin and know him.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 12, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, March 28, 2011

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