Saturday, December 23, 2006

(016) On Vacation Comments

Rating: 2.9
My family went on a vacation
I gave my father all the persuasion
Can I go and wander in the forest
To catch at least a tiny little pest

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
COMMENTS
bobBy 20 October 2020
BRUHHH what if ur name is less than 5 characters
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marivic Rosario 08 June 2010
reminded me something..
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Sandhya S N 08 July 2009
My god! ! ! I will not... I am scared... If U come with me I will try regards Sandhya
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What a wonderful adventurous poem! ! It was fun to read and as always it shows how talented a writer you R Risha! I enjoyed your 'favourite poem'.... Great imagery and title and I just like U would no longer go looking for a lion, tiger or a big black bear...((SMile)) Keep sharing................u r good at what u do. =Shelley=
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Someone Else 23 March 2007
nicely done story poem about the value of advice from guardians who know and care. Technical discipline is getting better as allocuted in my previous missives.
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Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007
Maybe i should just give all your poems 10 to save time little Risha....
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Diane Violet 25 January 2007
Exceptional vacation poem Risha......................Love and Hugs, Diane
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Mary Das 25 January 2007
Beautiful story poem. Well done.
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Dee Daffodil 05 January 2007
Excellent piece of poetry from such a young writer. Well done Hugs, Dee
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Patricia Gale 01 January 2007
A fine story, a lesson inside....
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Jibin Joseph 24 December 2006
good work............... keep writing wishes jibin
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