Friday, April 4, 2008

[02] Journey Comments

Rating: 4.9

Let's start from nail
Finger is the pathway to reach the palm.

Warm fingers caress warm fingers

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Ashraful Musaddeq
COMMENTS
Miriam Maia Padua 21 September 2009

interesting write.. brilliant thoughts... unique ideas 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Reshma Ramesh 09 June 2009

such a wonderful write......warm and inviting...well penned

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Saadat Tahir 08 June 2009

what an ode to gentle hip hop love the hesitancy of intimacy the fire of desire meagre on to eager on the way to foreplay beautiful....pointed advances cheers an ten

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Fiona Davidson 08 June 2009

nice write Ashraful...sensual...10+++

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 September 2008

A decent and delicate stimulating love poem. Presentation is very good

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David Threadgold 15 September 2008

Hi Ashraful. you describe a great journey very well. thankyou for the read. regards Dave T.

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Riquetta Elliott 28 August 2008

A journey that you want to find is very desirable and true. Nice poem.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 April 2008

fantastic true life journey...........

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