A sky in night is a mixture
of happiness and sorrows.
We feel its texture
as our debt and borrows
'Moon is our guide towards success
and Sun Is the path of success
Work hard in light,
to get reward in night.' Very nice.
a nicely driven Philosophical slab.
keep going :)
hi akhil, you're very talented for your age. well, i must say keep writing.
A well lived day -
Brings a night,
Full of fun and joy
Else it becomes
A time to grieve.
Well said in this poem.
Thank you, young poet.
A very nice write, my friend. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you
C R Clark
I really enjoyed reading this poem. Very interesting. I loved the last two lines. Good Work.
Very good.good feel & nice imagination.
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