Friday, May 2, 2008

02 Night Sky Comments

Rating: 5.0

A sky in night is a mixture
of happiness and sorrows.
We feel its texture
as our debt and borrows

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Akhil H Kumar
COMMENTS
Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

'Moon is our guide towards success and Sun Is the path of success Work hard in light, to get reward in night.' Very nice.

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Richa Dhodi 08 May 2008

hello boy a nicely driven Philosophical slab. keep going :)

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hi akhil, you're very talented for your age. well, i must say keep writing.

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Vidi Writes 04 May 2008

A well lived day - Brings a night, Full of fun and joy Else it becomes A time to grieve. Well said in this poem. Thank you, young poet.

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C.R. Clark 03 May 2008

A very nice write, my friend. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you C R Clark

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Haiku Mitchell 03 May 2008

I really enjoyed reading this poem. Very interesting. I loved the last two lines. Good Work.

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Akhil H Kumar 02 May 2008

Very good.good feel & nice imagination.

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