(044) The Night Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(044) The Night

Rating: 3.1


I sat & gazed
At the dark blue sky
That was as dark
As a blueberry pie.

My mom called me in
To have apples red
And then she sent me
Off to my bed.

I sat & gazed
From my window sill
The stars up there
That stood so still.

They touched my heart
They made me squeak
As I watched them
Looking so very meek.

I sat & gazed
With drowsy eyes
As I fell asleep
Waiting for sunrise.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 14 March 2007

Blueberry pie sky... i like that Risha...

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Diane Violet 17 February 2007

A beautiful view of your night sky Risha, wonderful poem! Love and hugs, Diane

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Carrie Carliell 24 January 2007

Risha, I absolutely loved this poem. It definitely is a 10 like Doc said. I loved the imagery and I have often done the same thing. I enjoy gazing up at the stars and sky at night. It is like a whole new world up there. It is captivating and the sky illuminated with stars is mezmerizing. Great job! Carrie

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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