john tiong chunghoo

1. A House Upon The Height

an abandoned house
saps the spirit with its
nagging and chilling
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  • Callie CarrollCallie Carroll (8/10/2008 4:28:00 PM)

    Excellent! Thank you for including your source of inspiration; I too use this technique (reading is my fuel) . What a perfect way to describe the way a decrepit house captures us, 'saps the spirit with its nagging and chilling emptiness.' You communicate perfectly the despair.

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