Friday, August 5, 2011

つ ぼ み Buds Comments

Rating: 2.6

I search in people of varying status
for a seed of humanity.

In some I suspect there to be a bud


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Martin O'Neill 07 March 2012

A very interesting concept of looking inside people to find the kernel of them. I like this.

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Stefanie Fontker 30 August 2011

Very beautiful, this is a great poem. I like the way you've expressed your willingness to grow, and the refusal to grow of others. Beautiful.

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