Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
Cochin(India)
Thursday, April 10, 2008

(128) My Very First Murder Comments

Rating: 3.2
There is something bursting inside
That I want to tell you
I once committed murder at the age of three
I have to confess, I do

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)
COMMENTS
Dorothy- A. Holmes 16 April 2008
Hello Again Dear Risha One so innocent as you A murder, certainly could not do.. Not guilty your honor sir, With me she did not confer, Too late they told her the fish needed water Not guilty your honor, not this sweet daughter, She is only three, look at that smile, Just a mistake made by an innocent child. Murder, no! Erase it from her slate, She'll grow up and be kind and become a poet first rate. Dorothy
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Sarah Abdullah 16 April 2008
Sweet Wonderful inoccent Poem thx For sharing it ^_^
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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 15 April 2008
Wonderful poem darling, very well done. Good luck!
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Meggie Gultiano 11 April 2008
nya ha ha well done Risha..oh how i miss you my dear..So you are now a lady! Enjoy this write of yours Love, Meggie
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Athul Krishna 10 April 2008
Nicely penned.I don't understand why u weren't arrested.Ha Ha
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