Amanda Lukas

Rookie (Ft. Lauderdale, FL)

(14) Writing My Messages In The Sand - Poem by Amanda Lukas

I used to write you messages in the sand, Mother.
I knew they'd be erased
with the night's rising waters,
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Comments about (14) Writing My Messages In The Sand by Amanda Lukas

  • Peter A. Crowther (9/6/2006 11:30:00 AM)

    Very poignant and thoughtful like so many of your poems (Report)Reply

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  • Seán O' Muiriosa (5/8/2006 4:34:00 PM)

    So beautiful and poignant. Any words I write here cannot express just how brilliantly you've written this poem. It's very personal and yet I can feel it will have reached out and touched many readers already.
    Sincerely, Seán
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