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144 Proof Right - Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Door closes on mayhem
OH! ! ! ! You back again.
Long time- no see. [same]?
YEA! ! kids got aids.
Doing homework afterschool.
Funny smell still comes from the room.
Polar caps still melting-[live on a hill]-SMART.
Heard a good one-YEA- GUY told a guy
about the Sant Andrias fault in CAL.
[[[[[ IT'S NOT MY FAULT ]]]]] GET IT? ? ? ? ?
Another on the house after that one.
Who's the 7 year old trans hooker on the corner? ? ? ?
New in town Just flew in. [back on the farm] YEA-
home life GOD Church, MOM'S APPLE PIE'S.
Times change don't they. [one for the road] TRIPPLE
Guy told me he's bankrupt-kid stolen the credit cards
LOST ALL ROLLING CRAPS. [used rocks for dice back then].
The 13 year old is pregnant again. [MOVIE SAID]
Abortion- [more like murder]. SAW the dog with the
GOLD DOG LEASH-diamond stud earings.
Well have to go.[ follow line to door]
No tip [economy]

1/28/2010 POEWHIT


Comments about 144 Proof Right by JOE POEWHIT

  • (5/10/2010 11:38:00 PM)

    Poem with difference in concept and composition…volleys of question to conscience...answer..who'll?
    Thanks Sir
    Ms Nivedita
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  • (2/8/2010 9:27:00 AM)

    Wonderful work of a are a genius in theological prose.
    God Bless you Sir.
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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (1/30/2010 6:15:00 PM)

    in this poem, you've mentioned that there are kids who have AIDS... sir, is that true? Is the world so infected that this infection also infected kids?

    anyway, nice write!
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  • (1/30/2010 1:18:00 PM)

    i like this, its more like a rap, nice lines (Report) Reply

  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (1/30/2010 8:50:00 AM)

    The 13 year old is pregnant again. [MOVIE SAID]
    Abortion- [more like murder]. SAW the dog with the

    fine lines. good marks 10
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 28, 2010

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