173. My Lost Dream Poem by Dipankar Sadhukhan

173. My Lost Dream

Rating: 4.7


Like the red glow of sun
Just before twilight
My dream was lost
In the sky of emptiness
And my heart began to pulsate
Like the silent cry of sorrow.

My eyes wake day and night
And tears roll down
Silently and secretly.
My heart is helpless
Like an innocent convict
Chained in a lone cell.

Sometimes my nerves stop
To work and then I feel
As if I am between
Living and non-living thing
As a virus survives
Before attacking beings.

Not for a single day,
Not for a single month,
I've been waiting for a year
Expecting my lost dream
Coming back to me again
On the Christmas Day.

By Dipankar Sadhukhan
Kolkata, India.
Copyrights@December25,2014(3: 00am) .

Wednesday, October 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 19 October 2016

A beautifully conceived meaningful poem. Sad yet full of hope ending on positive note. Thanks for sharing.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 19 October 2016

Thank you so much dear poet... you are invited to read my other poems..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2016

What a beautiful poem it is! Thrilling expression. The last stanza is most attractive and meaningful. Let me read it again, ...Not for a single day, Not for a single month, I've been waiting for a year Expecting my lost dream Coming back to me again On the Christmas Day.

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 19 October 2016

Thanks dear poet for you kindness..

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Hiroshi Satow 05 April 2017

Very good work! Liked it! !

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Manira Khan 02 November 2016

A great work deserving 10.

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Seema Devi 30 October 2016

Absolutely wonderful poem with some images.

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Last dream, written with good imagination. Nice thought.

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Richard Wlodarski 25 October 2016

Like an innocent convict/Chained in a lone cell. Two excellent lines in a poem that is full of vivid dreamy images. Worthy of the Big 10!

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 27 October 2016

Thank you so much dear poet for your generous words on my poem..

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