Monday, May 16, 2005

1929/The Jazz Age Comments

Rating: 4.9

flappers, with tall blond
hair, a decade of the
doller, bubbles of false
prosperity, a crash, a hit,

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DAVID GERARDINO
COMMENTS
John Tiong Chunghoo 28 September 2006

an age of syncopated notes and full bloom freedom for blacks and whites

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Ruby Root 06 July 2006

Hi David great poem, this was very unique and original. Interesting to read. You have a excellent imagery and good form. Your very expressive and lI ove reading your poetry. Take care.

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Michael Gale 24 June 2006

Bubble gum and a crash from cash. A nice write. God bless-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

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`DAVID..NICE READ....NICE WRITETHEM DAYS OF OUR PARENTS...ROARIN' & JAZZIN'...& LOOSING SOME FUN-MONEY ALONG TH' WAY...WELL PUT INTO SEQUENCE, GOOD SIR...A 10 FIR YA HOLD ON HISTORY''''''''''''''FRANK

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Kihindei Adai 04 February 2006

Wow, Dadid, the title captured my interest and then you deliberately made me acknowledge the other parts of reality occuring at that time. I like that, wonderful poem!

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Mary Naylor 04 February 2006

I feel you captured the spirit of the times. Nice poem.

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Louise Myers 13 January 2006

This is a good write. I just went to see 42nd Street. Lu(Kingskid)

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i have my idea of flappers, we wont go into it a nice piece of work or better still art Warm regards allan

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