Tuesday, March 18, 2008

8. Eternal Friendship Comments

Rating: 3.8
The two great friends Birth and Death
Conspired for humans, Lament and Breath;

The natal twinge the infant could never express

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Abha Sharma
COMMENTS
Dr Yogesh Sharma 07 February 2009
great poem, excellent rhyme, very deep delved thoughts.
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 30 September 2008
Absolutely amazing. Each word and each line of this poem comes with an aura of deep thoughtfulness. Thank you very much for this wonderful poem.
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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 September 2008
A beautiful poem it is.10.
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Greenwolfe 1962 26 July 2008
This is a great writing. I wish I could understand it better, so I could give it a ten instead of a nine. GW62
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C. P. Sharma 14 July 2008
Awesome! Your poem moves with Miltonic dignity. I liked the opening lines: 'The two great friends Birth and Death Conspired for humans, Lament and Breath.' You are a already a great and recognized poet. While commenting on your poems I feel small as if I am showing lamp to the Sun.
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Emancipation Planz 09 May 2008
Exquisite to Divine... keep righting them One Peace at a time,10derly Deana
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Sandra Fowler 08 May 2008
A lyrical write of great wisdom and beauty. Time will have us all. But words have the power to last forever. Kindest regards, Sandra
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Theresa Moore 27 April 2008
This is a fantastic poem that is very well written. You have captured with words the reality of life. What we must do is make our journey worthwhile. Thank you for sharing
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 25 April 2008
Hello again poet, wow this is an amazing poem, great work! L C Taylor
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Sadiqullah Khan 25 April 2008
ye good expression....one eternal dilemma
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helena dombrowski 22 April 2008
very good.... has alot of meaning to it.... you are a great poet... keep writing
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Trinity K 22 April 2008
The natal twinge the infant could never express The soul’s departure nor the body could digress; faces of a coin... wonderful poetic thoughts... regards...
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Dipika P 22 April 2008
crafted really well...njoyed reading it! ! !
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Rani Turton 19 April 2008
The whole cycle of life written down beautifully and with great poetic prowess. Thank you Abha.
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Thad Wilk 19 April 2008
Very well executed poem Abha! A pleasure indeed to read! *10*! ! Best Wishes! Friend Thad
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Lynda Robson 18 April 2008
The circle of life, told so well by you in this lovely piece of writing, well done Lynda xx
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Brett Ackerman 11 April 2008
Plenty of self-realization to this writing that really sets the table for a discussion of enlightenment and death. But here’s the thing: vision-quests, thousands of hours of meditation, the delicate finesse that make euphemisms appealing and wanting in grace, is in its essence, empirically a matter of individual conciousness. You have to credit the rich diversification of Abha's words though, for a well-lit fundamental distinction about the point of life.
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This piece, no doubt, in this Reader's mind, could be a school-text paradigm as to when couplet stanzaec structure is aproppriate & enhancing to its body of work. Death is Renaissance di excelscior....as it represents the nascence of a new, but ever-life....as opposed to our microcosmed time spent toiling in mortal life. ''ETERNAL FRIENDSHIP ', sheds positive light on the spirituality of Death....as there is nothing bella-grande, about th' inevitible process of aging: mentally, physically or aesthetically.This is fine work, as always, young lady....You are truly a gifted scribe. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..
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Rashi Dave 05 April 2008
well written. Death is as necessary for a man's growth as life itself.
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Anil Kumar 03 April 2008
Great Poem, Yet simple. thanx 4 sharing. regards!
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