Melvina Germain
Sydney, Nova Scotia
Monday, August 21, 2006

(986) Devistation Comments

Rating: 3.0
An uprising evolved in a far away place
with people of a totally different race.
We don’t understand their plight,
they have a very different fight.


Melvina Germain
Patricia Gale 12 October 2006
A powerful read, so filled with words of wisdom.
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Jessy Liz 14 September 2006
'The sound of gunfire permeates the air'.. Excellent wording. My only advice is that you may want to take a second look at your punctuation. Very well done though.
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Tailor Bell 21 August 2006
Powerful statements, Melvina. 'What is to become of this fragile nation. Who will be their saving grace'. I hear this loud and clear. -Tailor
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David Darbyshire 21 August 2006
Well your poems are getting much better Mel darling, this one is great well thought out, Love dave have a great week xxx
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