Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean


(a) 57 (Love/Passion) I Just Want To Keep Looking At You - Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

I just want to keep looking at you
What have you done to me, baby?
Your smile quenches my inner thirst
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Comments about (a) 57 (Love/Passion) I Just Want To Keep Looking At You by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

  • (6/12/2007 7:14:00 PM)

    Ah but the dream could never end........
    I like this for so many reasons....the style is structured well...
    it flows with an atmosphere of true delight...
    and the end is perfected puchlined.....
    top grades on this one......
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  • (6/7/2007 8:38:00 AM)

    This is gorgeous TO, the imagery is sublime.... Sigh! what a stunning poem! HG: -) xx (Report)Reply

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  • (6/7/2007 8:13:00 AM)

    Inside the bubble of bliss. euphoric yet afraid,
    the promise of the kiss, but what price might be payed?
    Lovely TO
    Danny
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  • (6/7/2007 7:47:00 AM)

    Very Romantic Tranquil... Done with Style Lady...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (6/7/2007 7:37:00 AM)

    what a romantic poem...i loved it..i liked the last two lines..this poem deserves a super 10. (Report)Reply

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