Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, June 13, 2010

A Barren Way Comments

Rating: 4.3
You did lot of survey
Found nothing to your dismay
It was brazen and barren way
How you could enjoy and have any say?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
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Darshna Chopra 04 August 2010
t was brazen and barren way How you could enjoy and have any say? ....... it like a wild dream......10
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 August 2010
===== ‘Do nothing which spoils the core’ ~Universal Clock ~ ~Universal Symphony ~ ~Universal Harmony ~ ~Universal Synchrony ~ ~ Universal Unalloying … Let us find/discover/in-tune/enjoy all these with ‘feel good’ feel-no-bad’ and full contentment will deluge us…excellent composition Sir and is as always… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 =========
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Chand Shikari 11 July 2010
It was brazen and barren way How you could enjoy and have any say? ...barren n isolatedway...10
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Chand Shikari 06 July 2010
ou did lot of survey Found nothing to your dismay It was brazen and barren way How you could enjoy and have any sa, , , really it is barren way and can be found nothing....10
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Maria Shipka 25 June 2010
This barren way was barren also for me, . by reading and trying to understand all poet inside you wanted to describe.... there was some whiles I caught the right tone but presently I again lost myself and stopped. Of course it is not your fault I so hardly combated, It' s me who have to more try to grow up if ever when I will be able reaching up your level :)
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Samantha Samis 17 June 2010
This poem is very motivational! Very straight-forward, and positive; I love your focus on struggle and moving forward no matter what.
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Pranab K Chakraborty 15 June 2010
So long you write with rhythm! Perhaps many of your writing is such. Run poet, run long. You have good wishes to make the earth a place as heaven. Your fight is why so tough. But you have to move forward as long as you can. In this writing also reflects your philosophy. Well, write more, live long....... Regards, Apoet
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