Nathan Barkley

A Beautiful Scar

This night so cold
Can't help myself to come in
I didn't know how good it feels to sin
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  • Chinedu DikeChinedu Dike (12/23/2019 6:39:00 PM)

    A passionate bit of verse, well conceived and elegantly brought forth from the heart.
    Thanks for sharing, Nathan.

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  • Lolita Hiroshi (11/6/2009 11:30:00 AM)

    i'm speechless....
    so emotion filled: intense
    WOW
    wow.

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  • Quin Faas (10/18/2009 11:46:00 AM)

    this is an intense rush of emotion..
    the best kind.

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  • Eyan Desir (10/16/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    haha beautiful pause hmmm
    sounds sweet
    that is a good one
    10s

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  • Saane Pahulu (10/15/2009 5:30:00 PM)

    this is so wow..i'm speechless again!
    its like a scar that you don't want to forget its meaning...
    thats like the real scars on me they all have a meaning and a reason to be on my body...
    and this is kind of a turn on! ! ! :) :) lolz
    this deserves more then 10+++ for thats how much i loved it! !

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (10/15/2009 7:52:00 AM)

    Hi, your poem flows passionative images of coming out of the cold into the warmth of love. It deserves nothing shy of a 10+++...very beautiful images of healing passion that smooth all scars
    Thanks for your comment on my poem 'a victim of love'.If you're new to Ph, welcome and keep writing you're good>>>>>>

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  • Gold Fish (10/14/2009 8:24:00 PM)

    Exploring new waters I see. Like I said, you're a storyteller. :) 10+

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