sarwar chowdhury

Rookie - 14 Points (Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.)

A Beautiful Scenery Of Relation - Poem by sarwar chowdhury

The car is mine; I drive it; It runs; Am I not related with the car speed sitting inside when it runs? yes, the velocity of the car has enveloped me; The body of the car is my body; I must take care of me-car body so that it would not collide with other things on the road.
The speed is me-contained
The speed is car-contained
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  • Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (11/5/2008 8:22:00 AM)

    On a trip by car in a softly nostalgic set and the car is running away... (Report)Reply

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  • Ashraful Musaddeq (10/12/2008 10:21:00 AM)

    A great work is done. Excellent.
    Especially, the concluding lines are amazing.
    10 from me.
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  • (8/2/2008 2:56:00 AM)

    This is a very good poem. Great. (Report)Reply

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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (8/1/2008 4:03:00 PM)

    car still moves when fuelled
    body moves with the earth unstoppable
    warmth arrows to dream above
    and yet unreckoned between the sun and earth....................wonderfully wrought by the imagery 10+, thanks for sharing
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  • PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (8/1/2008 2:52:00 PM)

    diversity and unity, profound 10 (Report)Reply

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  • (7/20/2008 10:16:00 AM)

    very philosophical write, Bob has really put it nicely. indded a beautiful scenery of relation.
    Mamta
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  • (7/13/2008 3:10:00 PM)

    I view my body as a vehicle, i am just inside
    looking out of eyes that see, steering far and wide
    visualize the control tower, here in my head
    i will lose my vehicle one day, then i will be dead
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  • (7/12/2008 9:23:00 AM)

    great compostion, enjoyed reading it (Report)Reply

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  • (7/2/2008 8:40:00 PM)

    This is lovely! Thank you for taking your time to inform me on this beautiful poem, I'm so glad you did. Keep up the great work, Sarwar!

    ~Jessica
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  • (7/1/2008 12:51:00 PM)

    well done, nicely expressed your feelings. (Report)Reply

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