yoonoos peerbocus

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A Bee's Life Journey

Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

With the freedom of an outlaw,
bees to whom earth
is but a benevolent garden
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Comments about A Bee's Life Journey by yoonoos peerbocus

  • Supriya Anil Kumar (1/26/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    its a good work... comparision with bees and our lives is very well done(Report)Reply

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  • Georgia Girl (1/26/2009 1:32:00 PM)

    this is wonderful, where would we BEE without them(Report)Reply

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  • '...' ... (1/26/2009 4:50:00 AM)

    Ecosystem goods and services...
    Pollinate to Pollution... hmmmmmmmm words to tink.. from food to rubbish..
    aroha Emancipation Planz xx(Report)Reply

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  • premji premjipremji premji (1/26/2009 4:05:00 AM)

    instead of being the bees,
    the modern youth are all set to burn them
    to steal the honey within............
    the world has changed so drastically.........(Report)Reply

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  • Indira RenganathanIndira Renganathan (1/26/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    A preaching message from an elderly person and I feel the poem relates to duty-bound honest beings in real life through the features of bees...beyond remarks and thanks for your comment Yoonoos(Report)Reply

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  • Tima Fat (1/26/2009 1:22:00 AM)

    full of suggestive allusions(Report)Reply

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  • Anjali Sinha (1/25/2009 11:33:00 PM)

    a neat one
    nicely penned
    anju(Report)Reply

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  • Christian Wiggins (1/25/2009 10:13:00 AM)

    very inviting. good writing. keep it up! !(Report)Reply

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  • Vijay Gupta (1/25/2009 7:21:00 AM)

    A nice poem.You have dignified the work and devotion of bees.
    Thanks.............(Report)Reply

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  • Suma Varsha (1/25/2009 6:00:00 AM)

    I loved the last 4 lines.
    They are awesome.

    good writin...! ! Keep it up...
    gud luck..(Report)Reply

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  • Sebastine HumaemoSebastine Humaemo (1/25/2009 12:17:00 AM)

    hey yoonoos much true....the life of bees blessed yet complicated..........n te lines about its duties and hives was awesome.....as human life just filled wit cry n blood these days....te way u compared t wit bees, whos life filled wit duties but full of honey was cool.............pleasant write...10++ sebastine(Report)Reply

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  • Meena Iyer (1/24/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    Too true! nicely rendered!(Report)Reply

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  • ! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~!! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! (1/24/2009 6:37:00 PM)

    a great poem indeed....like it a lot(Report)Reply

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  • Christina WeinkeChristina Weinke (1/24/2009 5:01:00 PM)

    wonderful lovely poem(Report)Reply

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  • Allan Macli BorgesAllan Macli Borges (1/24/2009 4:27:00 PM)

    graceful poem! ther's a important message on it...(Report)Reply

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  • Matt Burgett (1/24/2009 3:49:00 PM)

    well writen poem....not quite my ideal style but hell no style is the same 9+(Report)Reply

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  • Joya Feghaly (1/24/2009 2:26:00 PM)

    great poem... pretty nice too...(Report)Reply

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  • Mehmet YILMAZLAR (1/24/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    bee and honey as mee and honey................(Report)Reply

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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (1/24/2009 8:52:00 AM)

    The first line of the first para is exciting. a lot of comments already.(Report)Reply

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  • Zaarah JasminZaarah Jasmin (1/24/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    i like the way you put the phrases, well great work!(Report)Reply

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