yoonoos peerbocus

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A Bee's Life Journey - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

With the freedom of an outlaw,
bees to whom earth
is but a benevolent garden
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Comments about A Bee's Life Journey by yoonoos peerbocus

  • premji premji (1/26/2009 4:05:00 AM)

    instead of being the bees,
    the modern youth are all set to burn them
    to steal the honey within............
    the world has changed so drastically.........
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  • Indira Renganathan (1/26/2009 1:44:00 AM)

    A preaching message from an elderly person and I feel the poem relates to duty-bound honest beings in real life through the features of bees...beyond remarks and thanks for your comment Yoonoos (Report)Reply

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  • (1/26/2009 1:22:00 AM)

    full of suggestive allusions (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2009 11:33:00 PM)

    a neat one
    nicely penned
    anju
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  • (1/25/2009 10:13:00 AM)

    very inviting. good writing. keep it up! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2009 7:21:00 AM)

    A nice poem.You have dignified the work and devotion of bees.
    Thanks.............
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  • (1/25/2009 6:00:00 AM)

    I loved the last 4 lines.
    They are awesome.

    good writin...! ! Keep it up...
    gud luck..
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  • Sebastine Humaemo (1/25/2009 12:17:00 AM)

    hey yoonoos much true....the life of bees blessed yet complicated..........n te lines about its duties and hives was awesome.....as human life just filled wit cry n blood these days....te way u compared t wit bees, whos life filled wit duties but full of honey was cool.............pleasant write...10++ sebastine (Report)Reply

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  • (1/24/2009 10:09:00 PM)

    Too true! nicely rendered! (Report)Reply

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  • ! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! (1/24/2009 6:37:00 PM)

    a great poem indeed....like it a lot (Report)Reply

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  • Christina Weinke (1/24/2009 5:01:00 PM)

    wonderful lovely poem (Report)Reply

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  • (1/24/2009 4:27:00 PM)

    graceful poem! ther's a important message on it... (Report)Reply

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  • (1/24/2009 3:49:00 PM)

    well writen poem....not quite my ideal style but hell no style is the same 9+ (Report)Reply

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  • (1/24/2009 2:26:00 PM)

    great poem... pretty nice too... (Report)Reply

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  • (1/24/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    bee and honey as mee and honey................ (Report)Reply

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  • Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (1/24/2009 8:52:00 AM)

    The first line of the first para is exciting. a lot of comments already. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/24/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    i like the way you put the phrases, well great work! (Report)Reply

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  • (1/24/2009 7:04:00 AM)

    Yet takes no credit.Save continues to hold and serve. that is the fate of all proletatians, but is it? a great marxist piece there. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/24/2009 4:04:00 AM)

    captures a lovely picture

    and transforms it more beautifuly

    thx
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  • (1/24/2009 12:55:00 AM)

    this is nicely composed. Not many can write about something as plain as 'bees' in a wonderful way like this. I wish one day i could reach this level of writing..hoho..good job. (Report)Reply

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