Audrey Heller

Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida
Audrey Heller
Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida
Tuesday, July 29, 2008

A Better Life Comments

Rating: 4.7
The more you think about it
life gets harder everyday. You
strive to do the right thing, but
at times, it can go astray. It's

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Audrey Heller
COMMENTS
Terrance Tracy 26 December 2013
I have read several of your poems I concur with your expressions in the poems I have read. I have copied several of them to pass them on to acquaintances so they could find comfort in their infirmities Terrance Tracy.
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Adeline Foster 29 December 2011
In this poem you have expressed your dissatisfaction with those events in life that we all dislike. Your words are simple yet full of description. A very good job. Read mine – Cicatrix - Adeline
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 November 2010
Very good poem. It tells about the reality of modern life in which we have forgotten main objective to serve humanity and serve God. You are extremely truthful in your poem. I liked it.
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Morelis.G Salgado 15 June 2010
i completely agree with you.life does get hard all of the time.everyone trys to do the right thing.sometimes people fall but in the end everything falls right back into place
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Ken E Hall 22 May 2010
Such wise and true words in this lovely poem..things get more expensive each day but sunshine and fresh air is free and its all for me and thee...nice write...regards ++++10
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 23 October 2009
Materialism is fatalism. Nice poem. Ms. Nivedita Ten++ UK Thanks for comments Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lie Sly or other poems. niv
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Marieta Maglas 04 September 2009
It is an abstract poem that has a very strong message. I think that the poetess wants to send us the idea that the acceptingness of the reality can save us, the illusion can only turn us onto a wrong way, apparently right.Excellent poem...........10+++++++
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Ted M 21 August 2009
In our quest to achieve more, for us and for our family, we focus only on our materialistic needs turning into a machine. It's time we take a moment to see ourselves. Is this what we really are? Nice write...........
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 04 August 2009
This has a wow! great job!
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~ Jon London ~ 16 June 2009
Posted from your heart to ours....wonderful piece
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Lady Grace 14 June 2009
better life for you and me..good job..grace
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Surya . 07 June 2009
fantastic.such a kind persona. i belive you can make a lot of difference to the rest of us. posted10 love surys
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Alyssa Marquardt 31 May 2009
very awesome message I totally agree with you. nice poem
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Chitra - 30 November 2008
deep thinking there. materialism is something that we need to come out to reclaim the essence of life and its joys 10+
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Shannon Cobb 18 November 2008
dammnn thats really good. Sounds perfessional haha Keep writing, its good you write alot
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Amelia Patterson 15 November 2008
Jeez! 838 poems? You're on a roll! Keep it up! You are so right about us forgetting... with all of the new innovations in technology we miss out on things without even realizing it.We are the ones who make our life complicated, which makes it harder to keep up with the younger crowd once we are too old to sit at the computer or text our B.F.F.S.Your poem makes sense.
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Fay Slimm 16 October 2008
What sense and wisdom you have written here Audrey. Life is too short not to get it right. Fond wishes from Fay. in Cornwall U.K.
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Bob Gibson 05 October 2008
I think, the credit crunch will avail us all Audrey!
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