poet Neela Nath Das

Neela Nath Das

A Body In Empty Shell

I want to keep my head down,
To utter my prayer for us.
Let, fill us with pure light,
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Topic(s) of this poem: philosophy


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  • Yash ShindeYash Shinde (3/18/2014 4:32:00 AM)

    ...our footprints are ways for others to trace back our sins and virtues.....great wrk dear, this poem was a nice one to read

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  • Rishabh BidyaRishabh Bidya (12/8/2013 8:33:00 AM)

    Pure delight reading this poem! ! Hats off: D

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  • Elizabeth Padillo OlesenElizabeth Padillo Olesen (11/14/2012 2:34:00 PM)

    Nice one, dear Nilakshi Das, a form of spirituality and the need for awareness of the left-behind traces or footprints.

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (8/26/2012 2:31:00 AM)

    spiritual and demanding.....the way is shown in no uncertain terms....the path to eternity, the path to nirvana....
    prophetic and well written

    liked it
    cheers

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  • Deep Mukherjee (8/17/2012 12:53:00 PM)

    What's the use of this life,
    If innocence does fail?
    Will we have fun and frolic,
    With a body with empty shell? ...........
    Beautiful verse :)

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  • Anush Gupta (8/16/2012 11:20:00 AM)

    Spiritually vacant body, you mean to say, I think.

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  • Babatunde AremuBabatunde Aremu (8/16/2012 8:29:00 AM)

    Our lives without footprints are miserable. Man's quest is to make impact. This tallies with my poem: I Want To Be A Life Line

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  • Www. Poemhunter.com/m-d-dinesh-nair-2 (8/16/2012 6:20:00 AM)

    It is still a shell precious when poetic exuberance and the emptiness can be nostalgic for ever.

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  • Ken E Hall (8/16/2012 12:20:00 AM)

    A nice standard Let, fill us with pure light, sadly we are born pure and so many go off the beaten track but thanks to your kind that shout out for a crystal mind.thanks or this regards

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  • Leslie Philibert (8/15/2012 9:28:00 AM)

    I liked this, don`t understand the review from Romeo Vishal, who can`t be bothered to write decent English and seems to deduce a meaning from your poem that is not there...If you have some kind of problem, get it fixed - you
    don`t have to try and sort it out here, I thought this site is about literature, not about social networks.....

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  • Payal Parande (8/15/2012 4:22:00 AM)

    this poem is so Becoming and yet Dulcet.......an amazing piece i must say
    loved it
    thank you for sharing it
    love
    payal

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