Saturday, July 12, 2008

A Brand New Day Comments

Rating: 4.9
Uninvited thoughts, corrupt a verse
And poetry, you become a curse
Memory, you can be so unkind
Your constant ability, to remind

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Tia Maria
COMMENTS
Henry Brown 18 July 2009
Tia Maria Is that your real name? It is like your poem, it flows and it rhymes! ! ! ! ! ! Very nice
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Bursting with beauty. Thanks for making my day.
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Junior Pocoloco 07 May 2009
Your poem is fresh and natural. I know and have lived this poem. You have a fan here in California. Good day to you Raymond
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Dr Hitesh Sheth 22 March 2009
There may be a few clouds, along the way But they will make way, for a brand new day.........wonderful lines........Show must go on..........10+++
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Anthony Pierre 25 February 2009
This poem opened my eyes, really liked it, im only young but i hope to develop as good as that
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Luzaan De Bruyn 06 January 2009
i love this poem it is deep and is the reality i would appreciate it if you could read some of my poems my regards
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Amy Ludidi 01 December 2008
very interesting rhyme scheme, loved the poem overall, well written tx 4 sharin word
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Meggie Gultiano 13 November 2008
love the last two lines..I love the gentle flow of your words
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Adeline Foster 20 October 2008
I did enjoy this one. Some thoughts there from deep experience. Hope you read mine: 'Memory is a Cheating Thing' Adeline
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Tj Becker 16 October 2008
Loved the flow and rhyme. A really good read for me early in the morning.Tea and Tia a great combination; -)
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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 September 2008
Marvelous poem. Last stanza is amazing. A moving composition with magnificent metaphors,10 for it.
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 10 September 2008
Now this was a cheerful and delightful poem, great read! Loyd
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Kris Smith 27 August 2008
Forward thinking in this piece of magic, yes a good write your future holds so much for you with this frame of mind, smiles ahead of yourself 10 Chris
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Ron Flowers 22 August 2008
I love the optimistic message expressed here. Ron
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Tanya Stanford 15 August 2008
Brialliant use of use to express emotions. One of my favorite poems I've read today. Love the use of rhyme and seasons. Lovely piece of work.10/10
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James B. Earley 21 July 2008
An optimist......straight from the soul! Excellent.
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Bob Blackwell 13 July 2008
An excellent poem your rhyming's quite superb. It is only our thoughts that interfere to spoil our day and make us feel unhappy. Bob
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Dr.subhendu Kar 13 July 2008
All those unwanted thoughts of a grey yesterday........................... even when wrought of time past yet it sings the song imortal ahead of time life when flows in the plexus in space and time still it croons by the new day to be emblazoned...............interesting imagery of the life across timeand we talk of those passion yet unexpressed depicting the desire intoned, excellent work,10+, thanks for sharing
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Kyle Shield Laster 12 July 2008
inspirational. loved it! !
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Salil Sheth 12 July 2008
Good poem. Keep writing!
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