Monday, September 2, 2013

A Broken Heart (Prose) Comments

Rating: 4.3

When you left my heart
was broken
tiny pieces were scattered
everywhere

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Heather Burns
COMMENTS

Very touching! And I like the style of the poem with the lines running on from one verse to another.

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Marvin Brato 07 December 2017

Yes a broken heart can not be mend but it can still beat for someone else who is worth the love! Sentimental romantic poem.

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 25 November 2017

Heart broken! Nice poem

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Nudershada Cabanes 17 September 2017

The heart will always remember.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 April 2016

Love and pain! ! When you left my heart was broken. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pamela Sinicrope 05 September 2015

A touching heartfelt poem

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Melvina Germain 13 June 2015

Sadness revealed, surely a heart print that will never go away.....

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Mahima Pahwa 16 May 2015

a poem....that touched my heart the words usage has been done quite nicely

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Mahima Pahwa 16 May 2015

nice poem....that touched my heart the words usage has been done quite nicely

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Mahima Pahwa 16 May 2015

nice poem..... even i have a poem named broken heart but it is quite different as it is telling about a girl who has a friend and she has cancer

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Patricia Grantham 17 November 2014

How can you mend a broken heart? One piece at a time and very slowly. A touchng read.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 October 2014

I think the missing tiny piece was trust, when it vanishes it is never found again.

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Sahra Hussein 26 October 2014

it makes me to remember how it felt being heart brown. good poem 10

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Lily Mosweu 25 September 2014

Indeed, a broken heart never forgets. The pain, the love... One might mask it all but deep down they can never run away from it. I love it!

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Seema Roy 20 August 2014

Lovly penned true emotions. Very true. The scar will remain forever.

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it's so sad to be the one left behind but spirit heals and triumphs...good poem

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Marisa Eutsler 05 May 2014

so well written, and this is so true. love it oh so much

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Ramesh Rai 03 April 2014

searching everywhere in the darkest corners but it had vanished. I finally came to understand a broken heart will never be as it once was a broken heart will always remember. beautiful.love it. regards.10+++*

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Amitava Sur 05 February 2014

Very well detailing about the irrepairable loss, resulting to a broken heart..... very well written You may read my poems - 1) All at a time 2) Cause

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Swimming in the sea of sadness yet a true testimony of a broken heart. Well done!

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