Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Rookie - 284 Points (June 5th / Kerala- India)

A Budding Bloom… - Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Dear me! You wax and wane
Akin to moon
Display a crescent to full
Differ lovingly day by day...
A no-moon day too gives
The longing to watch
A nascent frill on sky next day...

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Comments about A Budding Bloom… by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

  • (5/16/2010 3:31:00 PM)

    Fabulous! Thanks for your very kind readings. (Report) Reply

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  • (3/29/2010 8:40:00 AM)

    A LOVELY POEM KESAV ji! Janani in her comments has also captured the mood effectively! 10!
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  • (12/25/2009 11:37:00 AM)

    It's like day so many comments/messages and somedays nothing at all.............but the absence of it makes it more hopeful to watch out for something shortly...............janani (Report) Reply

  • (11/8/2009 12:54:00 AM)

    This poem is like comparing a woman at an unsure stage of her life to the moon and how she reacts in showing her phases (faces), beautifully written. Thanks, mandara (Report) Reply

  • Simone Inez Harriman (10/14/2009 3:58:00 AM)

    A magical moonlit canvas. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Smiley Hooker (7/15/2009 8:16:00 AM)

    Don't worry if the moon wanes, your poetry blooms beautifully all the way.10 smiles for you, my friend :) (Report) Reply

  • (7/9/2009 6:11:00 AM)

    a nicely written poem..a budding bloom..nice to read..grace (Report) Reply

  • (7/8/2009 11:53:00 AM)

    you suggest very well the darkness by using this epithet: ''A no-moon day too gives ''.well written poem..10+ from me (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2009 10:29:00 AM)

    a beautiful piece of poetry. (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2009 7:10:00 AM)

    The moon represents the depth of our subconscious and shows how we express our emotions and nurturing skills, and it is the feminine side of our nature. And she can be quite fickle as your poem creatively shows. Interesting work.... Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

  • (5/22/2009 6:54:00 AM)

    yes i'm afraid so.............the female of the species, being as we are affected by all of that in a tidal fashion (Report) Reply

  • (4/30/2009 9:59:00 PM)

    That's a good baby song...a little baby or your beloved one...Listen to Elvis Presley's 'Moody Blues'...regarding the missus.
    As for the little baby, you can croon your lovely poem as a lullaby..

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  • (4/28/2009 10:27:00 PM)

    thats a sweet n simple poem.the phases of the moon described in depth with simple words.Humans do go through that change, unbelievably, unnoticed.Liked it a lot.Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2009 5:13:00 AM)

    in this early developmental stage..., there, ... blooms your hopes to see for a new tomorrw...cheers dear kessav..
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  • (1/18/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    a budding bloom teaches the magnificient use of imagery, simply an exquisite vision that emitts all flesh and blood.....the real zest, the endless passion of mankind...the never ending and unquenched thirst of love..........sweeeeeeeeeeet
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  • (12/17/2008 11:50:00 AM)

    is moon's life just a month- it apper and perishes in a month to us-the one day of its absence may be it's power cut day-10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/15/2008 10:12:00 AM)

    Short and sweet...nice write! (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2008 7:17:00 PM)

    short nicely written poem..
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  • (12/2/2008 6:45:00 AM)

    ..a good peace simplly yet clearly states the feeling of the beloved....! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (11/20/2008 3:10:00 AM)

    Nice poem to read at this late hour. Thanks for sharing it. Sincerely, Connie Webb (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 3, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, April 10, 2009

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