Monday, September 14, 2009

A Bumble Bee Comments

Rating: 3.6
A Bumble Bee

This, my body is made of clay
It sheds off a gram each day

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C. P. Sharma
COMMENTS
Valsa George 07 November 2012
An allegorical poem. Once we lose touch with the source, we degrade into meaner forms of life! A great write rich in meaning and in perfect rhythm!
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Marilyn Lott 10 October 2012
A delightful and whimsical poem. I enjoyed it!
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An unquestionable unique sonnet that radiate with rhythm and rhyme. Well done my friend! 10+
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Sally Plumb Plumb 28 February 2010
I wish we had a few more bumble bees in this country.
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Sandra Martyres 31 January 2010
Another fascinating poem....the choice of the Bumble Bee to make a point- is awesome....thanks
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moribund love 24 October 2009
very truly said. a fine piece.10+
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Deodath Debideen 22 October 2009
The bumble bee is the dark side/not-self having its own way. There is a science of how to restore the body to you. Call it modern yoga....the ancients only pointed the way!
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Irene Clark-hogg 20 October 2009
Another interesting aspect of life that you share with us, dear friend. Irene
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Onelia Avelar 28 September 2009
...bumble bees we are, yes, most of us lose the link with ourselves :)) and bumble around whole life intoxicated with honey...
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Sandra Fowler 27 September 2009
Your poems have many moods and I am fascinated by each one of them.10, for you. Kind wishes, Sandra
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Mamta Agarwal 27 September 2009
since it lost the link with me it turned into a bumble bee. All noise no substance very thought provoking poem Mamta
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Rajaram Ramachandran 20 September 2009
The body's journey in life like a bumble bee is beautifully narrated here.
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Rachel Butler 19 September 2009
I gave it the fabric that holds The beauty of mind and mold Rachel Ann Butler
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Bob Blackwell 16 September 2009
Great poem, I get the picture, sometimes life is so unfair.
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Patrick A. Martin 15 September 2009
And what then of the bumble bee my dear C.P.10
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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 September 2009
a fine metaphorical poem! signifieds astonishing! 10+
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