C. P. Sharma
Bissau, Rajasthan
Monday, September 14, 2009
A Bumble Bee Comments
Rating: ★3.6
C. P. Sharma
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Valsa George
07 November 2012
An allegorical poem. Once we lose touch with the source, we degrade into meaner forms of life! A great write rich in meaning and in perfect rhythm!
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Howard The Motivational Poet Simon
06 July 2010
An unquestionable unique sonnet that radiate with rhythm and rhyme. Well done my friend! 10+
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Sandra Martyres
31 January 2010
Another fascinating poem....the choice of the Bumble Bee to make a point- is awesome....thanks
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Deodath Debideen
22 October 2009
The bumble bee is the dark side/not-self having its own way. There is a science of how to restore the body to you. Call it modern yoga....the ancients only pointed the way!
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Irene Clark-hogg
20 October 2009
Another interesting aspect of life that you share with us, dear friend.
Irene
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Onelia Avelar
28 September 2009
...bumble bees we are, yes, most of us lose the link with ourselves :)) and bumble around whole life intoxicated with honey...
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Sandra Fowler
27 September 2009
Your poems have many moods
and I am fascinated by each
one of them.10, for you.
Kind wishes,
Sandra
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Mamta Agarwal
27 September 2009
since it lost the link with me
it turned into a bumble bee.
All noise no substance
very thought provoking poem
Mamta
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Rajaram Ramachandran
20 September 2009
The body's journey in life like a bumble bee is beautifully narrated here.
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Rachel Butler
19 September 2009
I gave it the fabric that holds
The beauty of mind and mold
Rachel Ann Butler
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Bob Blackwell
16 September 2009
Great poem, I get the picture, sometimes life is so unfair.
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