Charles Bukowski

(16 August 1920 – 9 March 1994 / Andernach)

A Challenge To The Dark - Poem by Charles Bukowski

shot in the eye
shot in the brain
shot in the ****
shot like a flower in the dance

amazing how death wins hands down
amazing how much credence is given to idiot forms of life

amazing how laughter has been drowned out
amazing how viciousness is such a constant

I must soon declare my own war on their war
I must hold to my last piece of ground
I must protect the small space I have made that has allowed me life

my life not their death
my death not their death…


Comments about A Challenge To The Dark by Charles Bukowski

  • (5/15/2019 10:04:00 PM)

    " My life not their death
    My death not their death"
    Intriguing yet thought provoking poem.
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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (5/15/2019 6:10:00 PM)

    One of the best poems by Charles Bukowski....... (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austin (5/15/2019 1:51:00 PM)

    A powerful and poignant write.
    Liked the ultimate stanza. Thought provoking lines.
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (5/15/2019 12:59:00 PM)

    my life not their death
    my death not their death…touching expression with nice theme. Beautiful poem on Life
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/15/2019 12:32:00 PM)

    " Like a flower in the dance" ! ! ! !

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Drtony Brahmin (5/15/2019 12:23:00 PM)

    I must soon declare my own war on their war
    I must hold to my last piece of ground
    I must protect the small space I have made that has allowed me life
    a very fine poem. tony
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (5/15/2019 9:46:00 AM)

    Great poem. Thought provoking about life and death. (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (5/15/2019 2:20:00 AM)

    my life not their death
    my death not their death.../// great and sublime expression
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  • (2/22/2019 10:11:00 AM)

    amazing i could never write like that woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow (Report)Reply

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  • (5/11/2018 2:04:00 PM)

    i love it keep making them even if their are bad comments (Report)Reply

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  • (2/8/2018 5:32:00 PM)

    Whats with the censoring (Report)Reply

    (1/14/2019 7:56:00 PM)

    its saying shot in the but idk they cant say it?

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  • (1/21/2016 7:57:00 PM)

    ............my favorite line ★ shot like a flower in the dance (Report)Reply

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  • (5/12/2014 4:34:00 AM)

    nice poem but the subject is death and such sadness. (Report)Reply

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  • Dawn Fuzan (5/11/2014 8:05:00 AM)

    VNice one very good (Report)Reply

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  • Brian Jani (5/9/2014 9:27:00 AM)

    Wow this is a good one (Report)Reply

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  • Rebecca Lytle (5/1/2014 6:00:00 PM)

    And also Rachael Vacharasovan is a twit. (Report)Reply

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  • Rebecca Lytle (5/1/2014 5:59:00 PM)

    Who the hell is going around thinking they are good enough to bleep the profanity in Bukowski's poems? ! ? ! ? BECAUSE I ASSURE YOU, WHOEVER YOU ARE, THAT YOU ARE NOT AND NEVER WILL BE GOOD ENOUGH TO BLEEP BUKOWSKI may God have mercy on your poor, misguided, ignorant soul! ! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Alistair Plint (11/2/2012 8:57:00 AM)

    Dear Site Manager,

    I refuse to comment on the poem you have posted, because it is not Charles Bukawski's poem...
    this however is...

    shot in the eye
    shot in the brain
    shot in the ass
    shot like a flower in the dance

    amazing how death wins hands down
    amazing how much credence is given to idiot forms of life

    amazing how laughter has been drowned out
    amazing how viciousness is such a constant

    I must soon declare my own war on their war
    I must hold to my last piece of ground
    I must protect the small space I have made that has allowed me life

    my life not their death
    my death not their death...

    You lazy effort of leaving out parts of classic work is really upsetting, it is just rude and offensive.

    Al.
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    (2/3/2016 1:49:00 AM)

    Thank you for that.

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  • (6/24/2012 7:10:00 PM)

    i thought that this poem was pretty unusual but cool (Report)Reply

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  • (6/2/2012 6:07:00 AM)

    What a comment: Suck a dick!
    Bur is this legal,
    Ok, grow up, , , err!
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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 13, 2003

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 5, 2014


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