Geetha Jayakumar

Gold Star - 14,431 Points (Kerala Palakkad)

A Chess? - Poem by Geetha Jayakumar

Life is like playing a chess.
It's moving in a slow pace
Unknown of what happens next.
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Topic(s) of this poem: game, life


Comments about A Chess? by Geetha Jayakumar

  • (10/11/2014 7:33:00 AM)


    all poems are own life and blood sweetness and pain and filled with love (Report) Reply

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  • Akhtar Jawad (6/20/2014 9:08:00 AM)


    Did I win to loose everything
    or did I loose everything to win.
    These two lines of this amazing poem forced me to think who will be a winner in an atomic war? Or both will be losers!
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  • (6/20/2014 5:23:00 AM)


    your poem of chess reminds me harry potter movie number one...that was filled with horror... (Report) Reply

  • Amitava Sur (6/5/2014 10:54:00 AM)


    A lovely depiction of life passage as how you look into it whether the glass you see is half filled or yet to fill half.Enjyed a lot in sharing the poem (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (4/25/2014 12:10:00 AM)


    Different perspectives of life we see around us, yet the life remains the same......Its our perspective that leads our way..........
    Among those numerous views about life, this metaphorical write is a lovely gem
    Indeed life is a chess, but are we the masters of our fate, or just pawns in hands of others? ...........we seek the answer............
    a well composed write dear
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  • (2/21/2014 2:53:00 AM)


    Yes, life is a game of chess......a race one wins one loses............Geetha......very well composed........ (Report) Reply

  • (1/23/2014 7:22:00 AM)


    Each twist and turn comes in WITH surprises.
    It's just A calculations.
    Stalemate is also a result in Chess.
    With your analogy you can compare chess with a war, wrestling, tennis, badminton etc....
    Lovely poem
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  • Wahab Abdul (10/17/2013 8:32:00 AM)


    ''
    Did I win to loose everything
    or did I loose everything to win.'' the wonderful lines i have read after so many years in literature....love it...10
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  • Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (10/7/2013 9:22:00 AM)


    Spare a thought for the simple pawn
    who having moved can never go back
    To kill, be killed or to flower as a queen
    His destiny if he reaches the last rank
    And each king may share a common fate
    Something we call a very stale mate

    (Good work - keep writing)
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  • (9/11/2013 10:30:00 PM)


    dearest poetess, thanks for these poems
    art of writes is likely to a painting...
    try to be a artist and love it
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  • Unwritten Soul (9/8/2013 2:45:00 AM)


    I am not good as a chess player, but i am the surface of what the chess played on...i am the strategy on their steps, from both sides...because me i am harder than any strategy they could read..because i am Unwritten Soul hahhaha..joking_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/7/2013 10:25:00 AM)


    wisdom on event theory(Probability) paradoxical derivation chess board to real life win or loose only for satisfaction porus lost but won If one wins the heart wins the world a proverb fulcrum on both side victory and defeat nice poem shared with you 10 (Report) Reply

  • Dinesh Nair (9/6/2013 8:28:00 AM)


    Somehow we have to make the moves. It is important that in your chess game played with life`s situations, we are all seen around close.
    I enjoyed reading your poem reaching out to the situations as rivals with might.
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  • Valsa George (9/6/2013 6:49:00 AM)


    A Beautiful poem comparing life to a game of chess! Success depends on how well we make our move and to some extent our luck! Whether a sucess or a failure, if one can celebrate life, no doubt, it in itself will be a success. Your jubilant spirit predominates in all your poems!

    I don't know why I had problems in locating your page and sending comments! Geetha, thanks for your sweet comments
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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (9/5/2013 5:24:00 PM)


    In a war you lose even when you win. Please read my poem 'Peace Lesson from History' which has some sentiments of war and peace. Thank you.
    I congratulate you on reaching a high rank among poets in the World and in India. Keep maintaining high quality in your poems. Wish you all the best in your writing.
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  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (9/5/2013 10:02:00 AM)


    If the loss is for Dharma(for Truth and Justice) as Arjuna one can be proud of even after such a heavy loss or one can bereave as Gandhari, mother of Kauravas. Your poem is very good.I give 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (9/5/2013 5:02:00 AM)


    The past is behind us the future in front, we must live in the 'now'. (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (9/5/2013 3:59:00 AM)


    celebrate the occasion, thanks, good write. present is always at our hands. (Report) Reply










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