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A Child's Reflection - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Made homeless from home
Bombed city where though many
Extend an armless arm, find it harder
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Comments about A Child's Reflection by yoonoos peerbocus

  • (1/11/2019 3:44:00 PM)

    A poem of home truths? We should not to be trusted with the Earth never mind the stars! .....well penned Yoonoos (Report) Reply

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  • Kevin Patrick (12/25/2018 2:31:00 PM)

    We look to the stars to dream, when we should look down in the world that screams. This is a work that should be read by school children to see the world their parents hide. (Report) Reply

  • Kevin Patrick (12/25/2018 2:31:00 PM)

    As I sit reading this, it is Christmas day, the world outside the four walls is a tundra in which the sound of the wind is like a choir of wraiths screaming from the basement of purgatory. And yet this work touches on the fundamental realities of which I am sheltered by, that a roof is a luxury, for those who have spent life living in craters in which all they have is their humanity. you turn tragedy into an understanding. (Report) Reply

  • Christina Chin (12/13/2018 11:00:00 PM)

    Beautiful write! Well crafted (Report) Reply

  • Dr Dillip K Swain (7/24/2018 8:12:00 AM)

    An excellent piece of work with a great message! Appreciated the content........10 (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (6/9/2018 11:21:00 PM)

    a great message the world needs it. (Report) Reply

  • Tariq Alkaritty (6/4/2018 7:35:00 AM)

    You have articulately walked us through this melancholy experience which however horrific is sadly real in many places of the world. (Report) Reply

  • Mahtab Bangalee (5/29/2018 4:14:00 AM)

    this poem touches every heart of humanity

    rightly versified

    10+++++
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  • (5/26/2018 8:11:00 AM)

    Excellent reflection of the devastating aftermath of nuclear blast...the savagery that transforms our very dear earth into a waste land. (Report) Reply

  • Michel Angelo (5/17/2018 11:47:00 AM)

    Wonderful. Enjoyed the work. Deep. (Report) Reply

  • Michel Angelo (5/17/2018 11:46:00 AM)

    This one is also nice. (Report) Reply

  • Oratile Diratsagae (5/8/2018 2:51:00 AM)

    I love it. You gave a clear reflection of intellect. I have to give you a 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Ivan Brooks (9/7/2017 2:24:00 AM)

    Very powerful that reflects the reality of today's world..one totally unfit for kids...thanks for sharing..kindly read my newest '' fifty Years young '' (Report) Reply

  • (7/31/2017 2:50:00 AM)

    Matthew, you are certainly entitled to your opinion. But a little empathy would be appropriate. I know people who have experienced such tragedy as children. And the only thing that keeps them alive is their passion for writing poetry and/or their music.
    Yoonoos, this is passionate poetry at its finest. Thank you for giving us a glimpse into this child's nightmarish world. I can't even imagine that child's world.
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  • (7/5/2017 1:42:00 PM)

    This is garbadge! It is not poetry buy merely self indulgence.Poetry is not a vehicle for self it is an act and a stage a troop of playerars that take you to a world of invention and wonderful possibility that opens up the truth about who we realy are! We dont need lectures and perceptive sound bites, we need empty vistas, gloriously unsung valleys and people we dont even know about it yet. (Report) Reply

  • Sara Militello (6/21/2017 9:40:00 AM)

    How sad man who dreams of a home
    In hereafter, can't share their warmth
    To each other's heart, here and now
    On native home land.

    Wonderful sentiment! I share this 100%. I despair that world leaders can so easily foment conflict between the world's people; pitting country against country; the people of most, I am sure would prefer to enjoy their lives, their families and friends and even their foreign friends because of the differences in culture not in spite of them.

    I have often wondered how so many can live with the conflicts within themselves engendered by the disparity in what they want life to be and yet behave toward others in so many of the negative ways we see them behaving all around us...
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  • Mira Kuznetsova (6/14/2017 1:12:00 PM)

    Very hard and sounds as natural real poetry. Thank you! Good work. (Report) Reply

  • Loppo Louie (4/26/2017 8:38:00 AM)

    A child's reflection,
    a child's dream.
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  • (2/3/2017 9:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, well thought out. keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (2/12/2015 10:11:00 PM)

    Truly a sad commentary on the physical and mental environment created by man in the name of development or hegemony. This is a wake up call. (Report) Reply



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