A Cloud In The Silver Lining Poem by UNNIKRISHNAN Sivasankara Menon

A Cloud In The Silver Lining

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When you see a silver lining in the sky
just look for the dark cloud
that it encircles, ready to break
into a thunderous shower.

Weeps itself into nothingness!

Cloud that dissolves into thin air
But would flaunt a happy smile
A rainbow of smiles
hidden behind a gust of tears.

Wednesday, May 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: rainbow,cloud
Inspired by poem 'Pain' by Nayanika Dey.
Nayanika Dey 24 June 2017

This is such an inspiring poem! This really gives positive energy to the mind and to the soul. Thank you so much for such a wonderful poem. I am glad that my poem 'Pain' inspired you to ink 'A Cloud In The Silver Lining'.

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soren Barrett 10 March 2022

A beautiful image and such metaphors and anthropomorphic use, Wonderful.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

Loved the detailed comments on the poem. Thank you.

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Sandra Feldman 24 January 2022

'As a poet cries'. An extremely beautiful and sensitive, poetic paisaje, deeply poetic, movingly tender and unforgettable.

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2022

Thank you Sandra

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2022

Thank you, Sandra.

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Susan Williams 24 January 2022

I enjoyed reading this poem yet again! I was taken up by your playing with the silver lining and that dark storm cloud coming---you have a unique vision--thank you for sharing it with us

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 January 2022

Thank you for revisiting the poem and the beautiful comments

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Nabakishore Dash 07 January 2022

Inspiring poem with genuine imagery. Superb

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 December 2021

My profound gratitude to Aarzoo and Lyn Paul for going through the poem and favouring me with their observations on it. Obliged

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