When you see a silver lining in the sky
just look for the dark cloud
that it encircles, ready to break
into a thunderous shower.
Weeps itself into nothingness!
Cloud that dissolves into thin air
But would flaunt a happy smile
A rainbow of smiles
hidden behind a gust of tears.
Lovely poem with vivid imagery. A work of an intricate mind. Thanks for this masterful creation, my friend. Remain enriched.
A beautiful poem adorned with superb imagery and stunning poetic expressions. The closure lines are very inspiring. Top marks!
I am happy to read your words of appreciation. Obliged.
A cloud in the silver lining surely deserves top marks and to my favourite
Thank you Geeta! For the good words, for the 5*s and for adding the poem to your favourite poem. I feel doubly honoured
Loved it dear Poet Unnikrishnan. Wishing you and your family a happy and healthy New Year.
'A rainbow of tears hidden behind a gusto of tears' Marvellous poetic expression that brings forth images of wondrous nature.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is such an inspiring poem! This really gives positive energy to the mind and to the soul. Thank you so much for such a wonderful poem. I am glad that my poem 'Pain' inspired you to ink 'A Cloud In The Silver Lining'.
Obliged!
Hi Nayanika, This is how life is. Your poem Pain, as I have pointed out on your page, is an exquisite piece of poetry. I have posted a line of comment on your page. But over time, the lines i had posted as my comment on your poem developed into this little poem, and I thought it fit to post on ph. Ever so obliged! ! !