When you see a silver lining in the sky
just look for the dark cloud
that it encircles, ready to break
into a thunderous shower.
Weeps itself into nothingness!
Cloud that dissolves into thin air
But would flaunt a happy smile
A rainbow of smiles
hidden behind a gust of tears.
A beautiful image and such metaphors and anthropomorphic use, Wonderful.
'As a poet cries'. An extremely beautiful and sensitive, poetic paisaje, deeply poetic, movingly tender and unforgettable.
I enjoyed reading this poem yet again! I was taken up by your playing with the silver lining and that dark storm cloud coming---you have a unique vision--thank you for sharing it with us
Thank you for revisiting the poem and the beautiful comments
My profound gratitude to Aarzoo and Lyn Paul for going through the poem and favouring me with their observations on it. Obliged
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is such an inspiring poem! This really gives positive energy to the mind and to the soul. Thank you so much for such a wonderful poem. I am glad that my poem 'Pain' inspired you to ink 'A Cloud In The Silver Lining'.