A Cold Grey Wintry Day - Poem by Walterrean Salley

'Like a sad song, its music play
To the melancholy lyric of:
“A Cold, Gray Wintry Day.”

Last three lines are everything. I appreciate this poem greatly.
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NDS (Report)Reply

So inspired I have been by this poem... that I too wrote one on a - Winter's Day. Its in the list of new poems today. (Report)Reply

Oh Wow! ! ! Is This Ever Perfectly Painted! ! ! Can Hear It, See It, Feel It! ! ! A Comforting
Melancholy Song Beautifully Strong! ! ! Touching And Inspiring For All! ! ! Such Depths! ! !
You're Very Blessed! ! ! ! ! Thank You For Sharing This! ! ! 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Added To Favorites! ! ! (Report)Reply

Walterrean Salley(12/4/2016 2:32:00 PM)

Thank you Rebecca. Your comments are invaluable.

You are such a deep observer...and from a little thing it can be a bigger scene...to knock every minds...of the time and sounds...beautiful craft :) . Loved it (Report)Reply

Walterrean Salley(12/4/2016 2:31:00 PM)

Thank you Soul doe your Inestimable comments.

The natural rhythm of the rain is so cooling as your poem! Simple and musical! ! (Report)Reply

A tune of winter in precipitation the seasons ring in conversation, each a character demanding appreciation, play no favourites as they rotate through station, each a seed in our imagination. I loved this poem, great effort. I love when we try to capture sounds in words and in turn their tune and lyrics, nicely done. I tried to catch a clock ticking in my poem I could not sleep, which was fun to contplate. (Report)Reply

You have indeed captured the sad tune of raindrops on a grey wintry day... well done. (Report)Reply

Sun is always there only our eyes fails to see. (Report)Reply

Winter moods and rain have a definite connection.
And you are in tune with the weather. Grey is
a favorite poetry color of mine. Ten for you.

Warm regards,

Sandra (Report)Reply

Very nice...lovely picture, well rendered portrait of a moment in time defining a universal experience. Through your poem my minds eye sees your day, written with enough space to fill in the details of days I've known. Well done. (Report)Reply

Very simple poem with an interesting title which finally turned into the title of either a song or a movie.Kindly read this poem of mine: RAIN RAIN TAP ON MY ROOF and give your comment (Report)Reply