I am haplessly entrenched near a road,
Bogged down by the war's heavy load.
Then as I view the skirmish ahead,
My mind is overcome with a dread.
good poem, being in the army i had a good career, made life long friends, you learn so much about team and depending on each other, like nowherte else.
Hi Joseph, I can relate to this because my Dad was a veteran in the Canadian Army. He didn't speak a lot about it but he did speak to me about a friend who had died. The war left my father mentally ill. At the time they didn't have a support system for the vets. and this was really sad because my father paid the price. He fought for 7 years in the Korean war. Your poem was excellent and again you write with excellent imagery. You are a talented writer. Take care.
This subject i've never really understood.War!
Not so much the reason
as we are so flawed
more the cost
Brilliant piece of work AGAIN!
love this. never been to war but get from you the view.
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